Steaming mug of tea
Burns against my palms, like hot
Pavement on bare feet
© Nichole Liza Q.
Written for Writing 201: Poetry;
Day 1: Water, Haiku, Simile.
Holding Summer
Steaming mug of tea
Burns against my palms, like hot
Pavement on bare feet
© Nichole Liza Q.
Written for Writing 201: Poetry;
Day 1: Water, Haiku, Simile.
Lightning Bug 
Love the visual this brings when comparing the hot tea to the hot pavement. Beautiful.
Thanks!
Brilliant simile…can almost feel it :0 Ouch!
thank you 🙂 me too, now I’m craving a cup of tea!
Great take on the prompt! Fellow tea lover, eh? 😉
Thank you 🙂 Well, mostly herbal if that counts!
Refreshing to see someone’s who has not just gone with water, rain etc 🙂
It’s warming on a cold drizzly day. Nice work.
thank you! in the spirit of writing what I know, I used the long, snowy, cold winter here in the northeast for inspiration.