Real Love Hurts

Real Love Hurts
Photo by Doug1021 | CC BY 2.0 License Photo by Doug1021 | CC BY 2.0 License

Real love hurts
Bruises
Beneath heavy blows
Wind-knocked
Lungs wheeze, gasp, burn for air
Choking on hot tears

Real love hurts
Breaks
Splits open, gaping wide
Red-raw
Flesh torn from bone
Exposing fiery nerves

Real love hurts
Bleeds
Stumbles to the earth
Battle-weary
Sweat-soaked hair dripping
Stinging open wounds

Real love hurts
Claws
Crawls along broken roads
Dirt-caked
Blood under fingernails
Dragging lifeless limbs

Real love hurts
Pays
Ransoms ruined hearts
Life-emptying
Demands drain reservoirs
Turning skin cold, blue

Real love hurts
Stays
Through bitter, brutal ends
Bare-backed
In the dust, forsaken
Whispering final mercies to the sky

© Nichole Q. Perreault

 

This poem was written in response to the WordPress Weekly Writing Challenge: Time for Poetry.

12 responses to “Real Love Hurts”

  1. Wow! I didn’t know you could write poetry Nichole! This is so heart-wrenching…you captured the horror of the crucifixion so well…amazing love indeed!

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